Liz Tomforde Here

So yes, sometimes the dialogue sounds like a couples therapy worksheet. Yes, the grand gestures involve spreadsheets and verbal affirmations instead of jealousy or grand fights. But after reading The Right Move , I caught myself thinking, “Wait, why wouldn’t a man communicate like this?” And that uncomfortable question is exactly why Tomforde’s work is so interesting.

Zanders isn’t just a playboy with a heart of gold. He’s a man who actively dismantles his own toxic masculinity, unpacks his childhood trauma on-page, and asks Stevie for enthusiastic consent while making her breakfast. Ryan Shapiro? He’s a grumpy control freak who creates a color-coded roommate agreement, then proceeds to break every rule because he’s secretly a softie who learns her coffee order within 48 hours. Liz Tomforde

Some say: “Finally, a romance where the hero goes to therapy, communicates boundaries, and doesn’t fix the heroine—he supports her.” Others argue: “These men aren’t realistic; they’re fan service for burned-out women . No 6’5” athlete talks about his ‘emotional availability’ like a LinkedIn post.” So yes, sometimes the dialogue sounds like a

Let me start with a confession: I picked up Mile High expecting a breezy hockey romance with a grumpy-sunshine dynamic and some steamy airport scenes. What I got was a therapy session disguised as a sports romance, and I’m not sure I’ve recovered. Zanders isn’t just a playboy with a heart of gold

P.S. The spice is excellent. But the emotional foreplay? That’s the real plot.

⭐⭐⭐⭐ (4/5) — but that fourth star is clinging on for dear life